Just commented here to tell you... The game is great kinda help me retain a leash in my boring life so don't give up on this because I love it and thanks for making a game like this
I'm redesigning most of the old sprites I had, so many characters are incomplete, I also have scenes with only text in my native language that I have to translate (I currently have some help with that) with nothing visual, animations to be redrawn and several bugs to fix.
So this game is pretty great and love how its being down so far. Some grammer errors but its alright as im not a native speaker of english as well lol. What i would like to see maybe added is will there be scenes where we lose and dominated? Surprisingly i lost to Aqua lol ( i beat her afterwards) and during the fight with the succubus i lost but it just kept going as if i had won. Maybe for future interactions have something that plays or something that happens were we get dominated by the girl we lose to as well as if we were to win. It would increase their lust more. Maybe a scene with Tsunade "Punishing " us for calling her old lol. And also would be better if we have dialog that makes us either for that type of thing or against it. And surprisingly would be awesome to see Aqua do something to us even though she is a useless goddesses lol. A sort of showing that our character really is physically weak without of Transformation. Im female so i am also playing as female so the Yuri route is what im referring to when im saying these things lol. Hopefully this stuff happens being that our MC is very weak without the transformation lol. If you have any more questions by what i mean im willing to explain more as i find myself knowing i will be with this game in the long fun of things. I give game 4.1/5 being as music and plot feel pretty good. I may not know where all the characters come from but i know Aqua alittle bit from konosuba i think and she is a funny asset in this game. Thanks you for making a lewd game i really enjoy
Replay is something you just type in on Google on phone and then just download the apk file. When you do that just install it to your device. Follow same instructions for Joiplay. If need any help im here😁
Everything but that is on the table, I'm very open-minded to know that what I do is erotic fantasy, a fictional product, but I just don't want to draw or write anything like that.
Thats understandable, thankfully im not into any of that stuff. I'm just hoping to see some foot fetish stuff in your game as I really like your art style. :)
Okay wanted to put down a quick review of sorts, its not going to go into anything but wanted to share my thoughts.
First is the more simple things, combat and story, these are fine, Looking at the Rework notice, this might change so not going to mention anything to this yet. so all good for this part.
So lets go to another minor thing, choices, some are strange and some sort of spoil how the story is going to go, for example the start, could just put '....' for the what you bring so anyone playing has no idea what's in the characters head and dont know what their going to say so it will hopefully allow the player to have the same reaction as the one your talking to (no spoiler).
and then to the main part of my thoughts, the character you play as... seems more evil than the games says they are, at the start you get 8 'good points' even if you pick evil choice this seems to be the default so why do they sound like they already picked the dark side? even if your good you still be aggressive (or at least passive aggressive) and be-little everyone, for someone who lost their memory and don't remember their past this seems off to how the character should act, of course the start might be seen as a conscious thought and talking without thinking but the rest seems to not be that. I know it might just be the character being stress or frustrated but still, could make it more natural think until you decide what path you choice. Just saying this as seems to indicate that no matter the choice the character wont change how shitty they act to others.
With all that said I still look forward to an update, this is only my opinion however so you don't need to listen to it, just wanted to share what I thought about the game so far, everything else is not worth mentioning yet or fine enough for the build.
Thanks for your comment! I love reading messages like yours; they're not very common, so they're definitely appreciated. Regarding the dark personality of the protagonist, it's intentional. My aim isn't to create a hollow character, but rather one with depth who can make decisions for or against themselves. In the end, it all boils down to what benefits them and what doesn't, what they desire, and what they'd rather avoid.
Let's focus solely on what you've seen in this build. The MC is impulsive, egocentric, apathetic, ambitious, proud, smart or clever, but depending on the situation, he can be very stupid, quick to act before thinking, also that he is a liar. (None of his traits are in a good way) They're driven by their impulses, and that's the essence of the karma system: impulses. You could say that he is an imperfect character, and that is how he was designed.
can you maybe change how the Female character is represented, its sort of a little off putting as the character sort of acts like a guy so its a little strange when trying to read through it, sort of felt I was reading someone else's thoughts, just a little thing and hopefully doesn't distract you much but be nice to have a concrete feeling for the character and their story, one biggest example of this is the Evil comment after the first Fight, it was really off putting when you the female character. talking about Karma, they don't have a lot of differences, the character sort of acts almost the same but only difference is, you don't seem to like your guide. Maybe be improvement as the game continues but this is just something I wanted to add as just finished the evil Path so its more one of the final thoughts before the next update.
Hmmmhh... I never thought of that, also because the MC is still the same person regardless of his gender, at least in this build, she doesn't deviate so much from her personality based on her gender as he/she doesn't have any experience being male or female.
Okay, that sounds reasonable although that said, the characters thoughts don't match up to what you want it too, in this build anyways, not having any experience should be sort of more of a confused mess so maybe you only remember liking Girls, maybe even having a crush or a Girlfriend, no matter if your male or female, at least you can sort of show that's the reason for the quick love interest and flirting, this can fix the issue of the character automatically trying to get somewhere with the other characters. Tiny thing but would fix your little issue of not knowing anything plot though that's my thought, it is your story after all so its overall your choice, am excited to see the story overall, the main characters story, to me at least, isn't really something that's interesting to me in this game so far. Anyways, I Think that's me done for this build so thank you for the response and hope you have a great development as its really good story prologue so far.
Off topic but what Anime is this based on again? cant seem to remember even though I've seen these characters before lol XD
Thanks, I appreciate the constructive criticism. This build is what I could come up with based on what I had from the previous project, which was indeed more confusing. The new update I'm currently working on is more extensive, so maybe it'll change your opinion. I'm still improving and doing the best I can.
The anime I'm basing the project on is called Isekai Quartet, featuring characters from popular Shonen Jump Anime like Dragon Ball, Naruto, One Piece, etc., added in.
Is there some sort of walk through or an explanation how this is supposed to work? I am stuck in an endless loop where there is nothing to do or nobody to meet except for Aqua (and even there, there are only very few choices that trigger a reaction) and then go to school, sit in the mjain class and do quizzes about stuff that I never heard off and that doesn't mean anything to me. Is there a way to get out of this loop?
Guys, for those who want to know, the game was 100% abandoned, the developer said on her social media "I don't intend to continue with the game for personal reasons" so whoever is thinking about subscribing, don't waste time with it, the game was 100% F
I was working on one but that version is very problematic, because I have to resize a lot of images, on f95zone there are guys who make android versions if you want to have a look.
I just saw haw far ahead the patron version was compared to the one itchio and assumed it was lock behind a paywall, like a lot of other porn games on here. My bad, sorry.
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The game got abandoned? i dont see any update nor a comment about the creator in a very long time
Is there gonna be a pk gor the androids one day ?
Are you planning put "Female" Rimuru from Tensei Shitara Slime, cause "her" will become nice in your art style i think!
I love your game very much and look forward to your future updates
Just commented here to tell you... The game is great kinda help me retain a leash in my boring life so don't give up on this because I love it and thanks for making a game like this
So no update?
Not for now, sorry, the game is pretty much broken at the moment.
How broken is?🤔
I'm redesigning most of the old sprites I had, so many characters are incomplete, I also have scenes with only text in my native language that I have to translate (I currently have some help with that) with nothing visual, animations to be redrawn and several bugs to fix.
Have good luck. I use translator to for english so i understand how it is. Cant wait for next update😝
Will there be impreg?
For our character or the other girls? Wouldnt mind that being something for me if i lost a battle lol. Whats wrong with me lol?🤣😝
Just for the other girls, I would find it hard to imagine a narrative where the MC gets pregnant.... hard but not impossible.
maybe like a bad end? Like a game over screen type of thing?
I will take it into consideration, sounds interesting, a curious challenge.
😝☺️
Yup
is there a chance this is coming on ios?
No, sorry, it would take me longer to adapt the game to a smaller screen.
So this game is pretty great and love how its being down so far. Some grammer errors but its alright as im not a native speaker of english as well lol. What i would like to see maybe added is will there be scenes where we lose and dominated? Surprisingly i lost to Aqua lol ( i beat her afterwards) and during the fight with the succubus i lost but it just kept going as if i had won. Maybe for future interactions have something that plays or something that happens were we get dominated by the girl we lose to as well as if we were to win. It would increase their lust more. Maybe a scene with Tsunade "Punishing " us for calling her old lol. And also would be better if we have dialog that makes us either for that type of thing or against it. And surprisingly would be awesome to see Aqua do something to us even though she is a useless goddesses lol. A sort of showing that our character really is physically weak without of Transformation. Im female so i am also playing as female so the Yuri route is what im referring to when im saying these things lol. Hopefully this stuff happens being that our MC is very weak without the transformation lol. If you have any more questions by what i mean im willing to explain more as i find myself knowing i will be with this game in the long fun of things. I give game 4.1/5 being as music and plot feel pretty good. I may not know where all the characters come from but i know Aqua alittle bit from konosuba i think and she is a funny asset in this game. Thanks you for making a lewd game i really enjoy
Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment.
Welcomes☺️
Nice game, I'm waiting for future updates
Thanks
Is the android going to be WIP
It’s playable with JoiPlay, don’t worry
It didn't work for me
It works for me. Make sure you also have renplay downloaded as well. Maybe that might help? If not im not sure
Did you download the iPhone file or PC file
Is Renplay on play store or not because I can't find it
Replay is something you just type in on Google on phone and then just download the apk file. When you do that just install it to your device. Follow same instructions for Joiplay. If need any help im here😁
Hope to see a fetish list at some point, is there planned/already foot fetish content?
I have a list of what I won't do, it's very small, everything else is possible.
Where can I find said list?
Everything but that is on the table, I'm very open-minded to know that what I do is erotic fantasy, a fictional product, but I just don't want to draw or write anything like that.
Thats understandable, thankfully im not into any of that stuff. I'm just hoping to see some foot fetish stuff in your game as I really like your art style. :)
Will there ever be an android version or no?
No sorry, at least not from my side.
that's fine just keep up the good work
Would the next update remain free, or it's going to be paid? Or perhaps both.
It's always been free and that won't change.
Alright, thanks for the information and hard work! Wyatb
Okay wanted to put down a quick review of sorts, its not going to go into anything but wanted to share my thoughts.
First is the more simple things, combat and story, these are fine, Looking at the Rework notice, this might change so not going to mention anything to this yet. so all good for this part.
So lets go to another minor thing, choices, some are strange and some sort of spoil how the story is going to go, for example the start, could just put '....' for the what you bring so anyone playing has no idea what's in the characters head and dont know what their going to say so it will hopefully allow the player to have the same reaction as the one your talking to (no spoiler).
and then to the main part of my thoughts, the character you play as... seems more evil than the games says they are, at the start you get 8 'good points' even if you pick evil choice this seems to be the default so why do they sound like they already picked the dark side? even if your good you still be aggressive (or at least passive aggressive) and be-little everyone, for someone who lost their memory and don't remember their past this seems off to how the character should act, of course the start might be seen as a conscious thought and talking without thinking but the rest seems to not be that. I know it might just be the character being stress or frustrated but still, could make it more natural think until you decide what path you choice. Just saying this as seems to indicate that no matter the choice the character wont change how shitty they act to others.
With all that said I still look forward to an update, this is only my opinion however so you don't need to listen to it, just wanted to share what I thought about the game so far, everything else is not worth mentioning yet or fine enough for the build.
Thanks for your comment! I love reading messages like yours; they're not very common, so they're definitely appreciated. Regarding the dark personality of the protagonist, it's intentional. My aim isn't to create a hollow character, but rather one with depth who can make decisions for or against themselves. In the end, it all boils down to what benefits them and what doesn't, what they desire, and what they'd rather avoid.
Let's focus solely on what you've seen in this build. The MC is impulsive, egocentric, apathetic, ambitious, proud, smart or clever, but depending on the situation, he can be very stupid, quick to act before thinking, also that he is a liar. (None of his traits are in a good way) They're driven by their impulses, and that's the essence of the karma system: impulses. You could say that he is an imperfect character, and that is how he was designed.
can you maybe change how the Female character is represented, its sort of a little off putting as the character sort of acts like a guy so its a little strange when trying to read through it, sort of felt I was reading someone else's thoughts, just a little thing and hopefully doesn't distract you much but be nice to have a concrete feeling for the character and their story, one biggest example of this is the Evil comment after the first Fight, it was really off putting when you the female character. talking about Karma, they don't have a lot of differences, the character sort of acts almost the same but only difference is, you don't seem to like your guide. Maybe be improvement as the game continues but this is just something I wanted to add as just finished the evil Path so its more one of the final thoughts before the next update.
Hmmmhh... I never thought of that, also because the MC is still the same person regardless of his gender, at least in this build, she doesn't deviate so much from her personality based on her gender as he/she doesn't have any experience being male or female.
Okay, that sounds reasonable although that said, the characters thoughts don't match up to what you want it too, in this build anyways, not having any experience should be sort of more of a confused mess so maybe you only remember liking Girls, maybe even having a crush or a Girlfriend, no matter if your male or female, at least you can sort of show that's the reason for the quick love interest and flirting, this can fix the issue of the character automatically trying to get somewhere with the other characters. Tiny thing but would fix your little issue of not knowing anything plot though that's my thought, it is your story after all so its overall your choice, am excited to see the story overall, the main characters story, to me at least, isn't really something that's interesting to me in this game so far. Anyways, I Think that's me done for this build so thank you for the response and hope you have a great development as its really good story prologue so far.
Off topic but what Anime is this based on again? cant seem to remember even though I've seen these characters before lol XD
Thanks, I appreciate the constructive criticism. This build is what I could come up with based on what I had from the previous project, which was indeed more confusing. The new update I'm currently working on is more extensive, so maybe it'll change your opinion.
I'm still improving and doing the best I can.
The anime I'm basing the project on is called Isekai Quartet, featuring characters from popular Shonen Jump Anime like Dragon Ball, Naruto, One Piece, etc., added in.
This project isn't Dead...
It's UNDEAD! MRUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
so much as it being abandoned lol. sounds pretty good so am going to give it a try XD
Tried it, its pretty good so far, for the hour I tried of it anyways, oh apparently I was at the end when updated this lol XD
you are probably at the end of the version. it got reworked and has not much content yet
Is there some sort of walk through or an explanation how this is supposed to work? I am stuck in an endless loop where there is nothing to do or nobody to meet except for Aqua (and even there, there are only very few choices that trigger a reaction) and then go to school, sit in the mjain class and do quizzes about stuff that I never heard off and that doesn't mean anything to me. Is there a way to get out of this loop?
é muito bom saber que você ainda está trabalhando no jogo, esses anos de espera valeram a pena, estou ansioso para a próxima atualização 🙏
Obrigado, também sou fã do que faço e é esse o plano, fazer algo de que gosto e que todos os que gostam do meu trabalho também possam gostar.
Do you still work on the game?
Every day, has become part of my daily routine.
I saw the last version you released and it was amazing!
Even though you haven't changed much, I can't wait to see what it's like when you finish this project.
I really liked the arts and the narrative is good, keep it up buddy!
Guys, for those who want to know, the game was 100% abandoned, the developer said on her social media "I don't intend to continue with the game for personal reasons" so whoever is thinking about subscribing, don't waste time with it, the game was 100% F
But I don't have social media accounts... ?
me when i purposefully spread misinformation on the web:
Can you make a android one plz
the game was abandoned, I explained in the comment above
I was working on one but that version is very problematic, because I have to resize a lot of images, on f95zone there are guys who make android versions if you want to have a look.
There isnt an android one on there 😞
Add android plz
the game was abandoned, I explained in the comment above
Bro im on android and cant figure out how to play the gam
ethe game was abandoned, I explained in the comment above
Infelizmente o jogo foi de americanas
F no chat
For people wanting to know this game hasn't been abandoned but the updates are being locked behind their patron, it's already in version 0.1.6.
It is not blocked, if you enter my patreon you will see that it has always been free, why are you lying?
I just saw haw far ahead the patron version was compared to the one itchio and assumed it was lock behind a paywall, like a lot of other porn games on here. My bad, sorry.